First off, hi, this is my first critique, like, ever, and I don't normally even look at this type of art, but I hope this critique is good for you.
VISION: Difficult to really comment on the vision in this piece, as it is evidently abstract and therefore hard to confirm a specific idea being presented here. I do like the idea with the buildup of a new picture from the starting blocks of the rounded rectangles - very nice.
ORIGINALITY: Well, I certainly have not seen anything like this before, but I'm not a regular to this genre of art, so I probably shouldn't make any rash judgement. I like the overall look of the piece - a very interesting way to use copics.
TECHNIQUE: Love love love the shininess you've given to the individual pieces, very nice and gives the piece a futuristic look. You've obviously got skill in the medium, and you use it very well here to present this piece.
IMPACT: No real emotional impact given off here, which probably isn't a massive surprise (it's probably not designed to have any), but I did get enough of a wow factor to click the thumbnail. And I wasn't disappointed. So, it did the job.
Interesting that you call it "descending eagle". Somehow I can see it when I glance at it, but when I examine it closely to try to find the shape of an eagle, I can no longer see it. It's interesting and I like it.